TechnoCookie's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SUCK IT UP]

The basis of a great piece is here, the pose, facial expression and background are great, but the colors are my biggest problem with it.

Her dark brown top and outlines in combination with her reds being the same color as the background characters makes her blend in too much with said background.

I understand the decision to give her a dark reddish brown, since it’s a darker version version of one of her most prominent color. But I feel a dark blue or teal would have worked better, as blue is also super prominent in her design and would contrast more with the red background.

Speaking of the background, all I would change is making it a darker red.

Keep in mind none of this criticism is to try and demoralize you or to say your art sucks and you should quit. In fact, I generally love your art and it inspires me to be a better artist myself. I’m telling you all this because I want you to be the best artist you can be.

I hope this feedback helps you in the future.

Agrimmora responds:

I appreciate the feedback greatly! I can understand where you are coming from and will try to make palettes that pop out more with each other, even if i like unifying them a bit.

[Cammy White SF6]

I'm really digging the arcs on this piece

[Halifax Mario 3]

Nice seeing my province on the site. Does Mario climb on the wave statue like all those kids did?

SuperPhil64 responds:

You know he does. No sign saying "Do not stand on wave" will stop him.

[Mushroom skyland (Mario and the metalic factory)]

I wish modern Mario games looked like this

CheetoDeeto responds:

It would be better than a new super mario bros game

[Nova [trade]]

Phenomenal!

[Let's-a-Go!]

Love how stylized this is, I'd make the focus on Mario rather than the rainbow trail, since he's the most detailed thing on the image, essentially making half the image empty space

JashuoN responds:

Thanks! Actually the empty space originally had the text "Happy Mar10 Day!" on the right, but I removed it when uploading it here since, well it's not March 10th anymore lol

[The "Laugh Track"]

"Most laugh tracks were recorded in the 50s"

"You're listening to dead people"

[The Tank Files [SUPER SECRET; VERY SCARY]]

DON'T WATCH TANK COCK AT 3AM, WORST MISTAKE OF MY LIFE

[Hominid]

I love this design

[NG Creepypasta Collab 2022 Entry]

you win